personal narrative with song lyrics!!

when i ws little and when and i had just mvied in to my new house i was always scared of my naver. Never wanted to go over there or even just look at his house but one day we had to go over there becaouse my parents wanted to go say hi becaouse we didnt know him and he didnt know us so we went to go introduse are self so when we knocked on the door it just look spooky so i was hiding behing my mom legs but whe he opened the door and then i seen him he didnt look so scarry after worse but i still didnt trust him then he told us to come in when we enter he asked us if we were thirsty we said no thanks .... so after we started talking and stuff like that.... then he had said "hold on ill be right back" so he left went into his room i tryed to see where he was going.. but then this one room out of know were got my untendhon i went in side nd it was all spooky there was spider webs every were so then i saw this realy old piano i stared tuching the keys one by one and the sound sounded so beutiful then out of now were the old guy comes in and tells me "wat were you doin in here" i said "nothig but i like ur piano". then he stared play song that ill never for get he said "this was his and his wife song" the song was called "BETTER TO GETHER" BY "jack johnson".....
HERE ARE THE LYRICS:

There's no combination of words
I could put on the back of a postcard
No song that I could sing
But I can try for your heart
Our dreams, and they are made out of real things
Like a, shoebox of photographs
With sepiatone loving
Love is the answer,
At least for most of the questions in my heart
Like why are we here? And where do we go?
And how come it's so hard?
It's not always easy and
Sometimes life can be deceiving
I'll tell you one thing it's always better when we're together

[Chorus:]
MMM it's always better when we're together
Yeah, we'll look at them stars when we're together
Well, it's always better when we're together
Yeah, it's always better when we're together

And all of these moments
Just might find their way into my dreams tonight
But I know that they'll be gone
When the morning light sings
And brings new things
For tomorrow night you see
That they'll be gone too
Too many things I have to do
But if all of these dreams might find their way
Into my day to day scene
I'd be under the impression
I was somewhere in between
With only two
Just me and you
Not so many things we got to do
Or places we got to be
We'll Sit beneath the mango tree now

It's always better when we're together
Mmmm, we're somewhere in between together
Well, it's always better when we're together
Yeah, it's always better when we're together

MMmmmm MMMmmmm Mmmmmm
I believe in memories
They look so, so pretty when I sleep
Hey now, and when I wake up,
You look so pretty sleeping next to me
But there is not enough time,
And there is no, no song I could sing
And there is no, combination of words I could say
But I will still tell you one thing
We're better together.

!! challenges!!where im from!! !!for 2010!!

The world is changing so fast
Where the good things do not seem to last,
Living in a world that is cruel,
Where violence and gangs are cool,
Drugs and alcohol are easy to get
But all it brings are bad memories hoping to forget,


Seeing family in danger with tears in their eyes,
And hearts full of anger,
Makes me sad seeing my family’s broken heart
And it makes me wonder why our world is falling apart,
Growing in the city of South LA and waking up to gun shots and sirens.
Gave me an option to choose the right way.

The friends that we choose also have fault in the choices we make today,
Youth in my neighborhood I see that they have the option to choose to go to school
Or stay home and play on the streets. I don’t understand why parents don’t make them go to school.
My friends on my street and part of gangs there brothers are from gangs and they ask me to be part of the gang but I choose to just be friends, I would ask them what to play today and they would say I need money and lets rob today.

Now that a few days have passed,
Its time to make some changes at last,
I went to the police they were no help,
They did not even care how I felt,
Their actions had me wanting to go to mayor,
Hoping that someone will listen to my prayers,
I know we could stop it, I just wish this never happened
And violence and crimes would come to an end.


By: Cesar