!!how i grown as a writer!!

How i have grown as a writer, i asked my teacher Ms.erudite wich is my english teacher, that not here real name but she tells us to write Ms.erudite for some reason.... but eny ways i told her what do i have to do,and what you mean as how i grown as writer.. she told me how she usely tells does go ask some one else im bizzy... and when she read this littl part that you are readding write now she laughed so i gess she ganna write about me to also on her blog, and a cupple a weeks ago, she wrote some thing about "how to tern a corner".. i gess that it was do that day, but what was funny was i kept bugging her alot that she was getting pissoff at me. and then she had cot me eating skittles, that i had droped one and she seen it... and had kicked me out of class, then a min later i sneeked in back in class and she had told my friend katherin i think tats how you sppell her name, well back to the pont she told her i have to write a paper about how to tern a corner. kathy had said something els and i had to..... but at the end it ended up being funny because she wrote something about us like i got here to this school, and how anoyeing i was being... and every thing you just read is how i had grown to be a writer.. yes it mite not make sence but this i how i realy grown as a writer.

found poem

I AM CESAR.
I HEAR BIRDS, PEOPLE, AND OTHERS.
I FEEL THE SAND, WATER, COMING UP MY HAND THE OCEAN.
I SEE THE PEOPLE, ANIMALS, NATURE, THE WORLD.
I TRUST MY FAMILY, NABORES, AND MY FRIENSD.
I AM CESAR.
I AM WHAT I AM.
I AM CESAR
I AM WHAT I WANNA BE.
I AM RESPECFUL.
I AM HELPFUL.
I AM RESPONSIBAL.
I AM WHAT I AM.

whats on my mind....

Today was kind of boring because in 1st period all we did was algebra like usually. so then i went to second period witch is PE.... but i only get PE.. on Tuesday and Thursday but on monday, wensday and friday i get life skills. so ya like i was saying what i did to day in PE was just playing basket ball and talking to girls hhhaaa.... but one of the girls wouldnt talk to me for some reason so then i just left i dont know... the bell ranged after ...the bell we have here at are school is realy low so i could breally hear it, so it was time to go chenge so i went in to the lockers and i though my locker was open but i was roung so i was ok... then i left to go eat lunch because it was time for it... then i cept getting text from my friend ....thaT CEPT TELLING ME " WERE ARE AT" so i just told wait for me and he said ok..... then i founf my friend and we were ganna go get to lunch but then we found out that someone was selling noodles. so we went to find out so we did and it was a teacher so we bot some, then the bell ranged so we had to go to class... i had 3rd period i have spanish i went to spansh wich is really boreing cuz i dont really understand it ..... so i waited till the bell ranged to go to 4th period wich is english....... i went to that class and my teacher told me to go on my blog and tipe my skeam of conscioness...... so now im wrighting this so every word you just read i just tiped it so now i just finish and please comment...... bye......

martin luthur king jr. was born January 15,1929 died april 4,1968.
martin luthur king jr. was a good man a very speals person he is a person that people will never for get about. what he did for are race and how he tryed to change the world, martin luthur king jr was a african american baack in the time in the 16 hundreds there was slavery. slavery was somthing horrible... slavery was when people treated plack peole like dogs... like i mean the wight people would make black people do stuff for them like they would make them do there chores every day and pritty much they owned them so then in the 17 hundreds there was a constitution and in the consttution it said that no more slavery but just cuse there was no more slavery the wight people still bossed around the black people like in the 1960's the schools would put diffrint sines like in the restrooms there would be sines like only black people could come in this restroom and another sined said only wight people chould come in... so then martin luthur king grewed up and i gess that he had in nuff so he went on protesting like he said that we all people would come to pease so then more people like wat he was doing so they joined along martin luthur king jr. was not ganna stop! martin luthur king did alot of speaches but one speach that alot of people will never for get till this day that he said that he has a dream that every one would come to a pease but one alfo day on april 4,1968 martin luthur king jr. was shot and died so thats why people will never for get about him god bless mutur luthr king jr.

!!literary treasure.!!

this is one good poen that got my attention was really good i didnt realy wanted to read this poem bcause i though that it was ganna be long so then i seen it and then I started to laugh..i started to read it but i realy didnt understand it the poem is realy short so how bout you can tell my what you think about it...here is the author
his name is "William Carlos Williams"
poem:

"I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold"

!!pository essay!!

BAD LUCK KEVIN There was a little boy name Kevin. One day he was a home in his room playing his video game he had just bought. he was almost at his last level he just needed two more levels to go. Until his mom called him to come down stairs, she said Kevin ‘’ I need you to go to the store for me to get milk for later on’’. Kevin said ‘’why can you do it i'm almost done playing the new game.’’ ‘’What if gorge comes and mess it up.’ he said. So Kevin thinks about what he is about to do so he turns off the TV, but not the game system he gets a pillow to cover the system so his little brother doesn’t think its in his room. Kevin comes running down the stairs and he gets the money from his mom and goes out side and try’s to talk fast so his little brother doesn’t touch the system. When Kevin walks by Mr.Hower house Kevin sees the gate door open but he doesn’t sees the mr.Hower dog Cory so Kevin stops and looks around but he doesn’t sees him so he starts to walk, then he starts to walk a little faster so he’s walking then Kevin sees Cory the dog so Kevin starts to run as fast for his life Kevin is running screaming ‘’ !!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA SOME ONE HELP HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! So then Kevin sees the store across the street he sees Cory behind him so Kevin doesn’t wait for the light to change to green, so Kevin runs for it. All the cars start to beet saying ‘’! Get of the street your going tot killed.’’ Kevin gets to the store and goes in side and gets the milk when he gets to the counter the guys says ‘’ its $2.25’’ Kevin puts his hand in his poket and he doesn’t finds the money he says ‘’ OH NO I LOST THE MONEY!’’ So he goes back to look for the money when he does he finds it on the floor all rondo up he looks for the dog Cory but he guesses the dog is not there. So Kevin goes back to the store to buy the milk when pays the money he thinks back what he is about to do so he crosses the street he’s walking slowly he’s looking around for the dog Kevin stops and he sees him Kevin heart starts to beet fast but the dog is on the other side of the street Kevin starts to walk a little fast till the dog Cory snits Kevin. So Kevin starts to run fast Cory the dog sees him and starts to chance him Kevin gets by his house he throes the milk at the door and Kevin jumps through the window he shuts it he runs for the door and get the milk goes to his mom and give her the milk and he starts to tell her. ‘’ thanks a lot mom you almost had me killed.’’ When he gets ups stairs he sees his little brother gorge on the game Kevin looks at the TV and its say GAME OVER.

personal narrative with song lyrics!!

when i ws little and when and i had just mvied in to my new house i was always scared of my naver. Never wanted to go over there or even just look at his house but one day we had to go over there becaouse my parents wanted to go say hi becaouse we didnt know him and he didnt know us so we went to go introduse are self so when we knocked on the door it just look spooky so i was hiding behing my mom legs but whe he opened the door and then i seen him he didnt look so scarry after worse but i still didnt trust him then he told us to come in when we enter he asked us if we were thirsty we said no thanks .... so after we started talking and stuff like that.... then he had said "hold on ill be right back" so he left went into his room i tryed to see where he was going.. but then this one room out of know were got my untendhon i went in side nd it was all spooky there was spider webs every were so then i saw this realy old piano i stared tuching the keys one by one and the sound sounded so beutiful then out of now were the old guy comes in and tells me "wat were you doin in here" i said "nothig but i like ur piano". then he stared play song that ill never for get he said "this was his and his wife song" the song was called "BETTER TO GETHER" BY "jack johnson".....
HERE ARE THE LYRICS:

There's no combination of words
I could put on the back of a postcard
No song that I could sing
But I can try for your heart
Our dreams, and they are made out of real things
Like a, shoebox of photographs
With sepiatone loving
Love is the answer,
At least for most of the questions in my heart
Like why are we here? And where do we go?
And how come it's so hard?
It's not always easy and
Sometimes life can be deceiving
I'll tell you one thing it's always better when we're together

[Chorus:]
MMM it's always better when we're together
Yeah, we'll look at them stars when we're together
Well, it's always better when we're together
Yeah, it's always better when we're together

And all of these moments
Just might find their way into my dreams tonight
But I know that they'll be gone
When the morning light sings
And brings new things
For tomorrow night you see
That they'll be gone too
Too many things I have to do
But if all of these dreams might find their way
Into my day to day scene
I'd be under the impression
I was somewhere in between
With only two
Just me and you
Not so many things we got to do
Or places we got to be
We'll Sit beneath the mango tree now

It's always better when we're together
Mmmm, we're somewhere in between together
Well, it's always better when we're together
Yeah, it's always better when we're together

MMmmmm MMMmmmm Mmmmmm
I believe in memories
They look so, so pretty when I sleep
Hey now, and when I wake up,
You look so pretty sleeping next to me
But there is not enough time,
And there is no, no song I could sing
And there is no, combination of words I could say
But I will still tell you one thing
We're better together.

!! challenges!!where im from!! !!for 2010!!

The world is changing so fast
Where the good things do not seem to last,
Living in a world that is cruel,
Where violence and gangs are cool,
Drugs and alcohol are easy to get
But all it brings are bad memories hoping to forget,


Seeing family in danger with tears in their eyes,
And hearts full of anger,
Makes me sad seeing my family’s broken heart
And it makes me wonder why our world is falling apart,
Growing in the city of South LA and waking up to gun shots and sirens.
Gave me an option to choose the right way.

The friends that we choose also have fault in the choices we make today,
Youth in my neighborhood I see that they have the option to choose to go to school
Or stay home and play on the streets. I don’t understand why parents don’t make them go to school.
My friends on my street and part of gangs there brothers are from gangs and they ask me to be part of the gang but I choose to just be friends, I would ask them what to play today and they would say I need money and lets rob today.

Now that a few days have passed,
Its time to make some changes at last,
I went to the police they were no help,
They did not even care how I felt,
Their actions had me wanting to go to mayor,
Hoping that someone will listen to my prayers,
I know we could stop it, I just wish this never happened
And violence and crimes would come to an end.


By: Cesar